Thursday, March 19, 2015
In writing the story, I've known what the final page is for a good while. Leading up to it, I jotted down ideas about what could happen as I went along. I picked and chose what was pertinent to the overall story. Sometimes I don't use ideas I really like because they are distracting from what I'm trying to get across. How do I know what's correct? The great thing about writing is I am in charge of deciding these things.
I had previously written up a run of 7 pages and hit my final page. After a read through or two, I wrote down a few things I thought I needed to get across to the reader. So another three pages were written. I sat down tonight and drew up a wee plan (shown above - sans plot details) to put the pages in the order they will appear. Everything is in there now, and adjustments to dialogue have been made because of the new running order. You really want to try and get everything in its proper place before finishing the pages - rewriting comics is not as simple as rewriting prose.
It's now time to get on with this.
Thursday, March 12, 2015
Not really. But that was the open call that went out as part of the “Comics, So What?” event that took place recently, arranged by Chris Murray and Phillip Vaughan at The University of Dundee.
Attendees were invited to discuss favourite comic pages and why they liked them. I went along armed with two related pages.
|Photo by Damon Herd.|
As I said on the day, choosing your favourite comics page is an impossible task, so what I decided to do was concentrate on the first page I can remember appreciating for the comics storytelling devices it used, as opposed to purely enjoying the story for what was happening in it. I had definitely read comics prior to this, such as The Dandy and Spider-Man, but here is where I took a step towards appreciating comics for being comics…
This is Star Wars by Roy Thomas and Howard Chaykin, which puts us in the late 1970s. It would have been a case of me asking my Dad for this because it said Star Wars in big letters on it, in much the same way that I wanted the ice lolly, bubble gum cards, etc.
To set up the story of this page: As the cantina sequence in the movie had been so memorable and popular with audiences, one of the first things to occur in the comics was a visit to a similar establishment. Over the preceding couple of pages, the green lizard alien shown here has been bullying Han Solo, who at first displays his usual bravura self in dealing with this, and tells his aggressor to get lost before his wookiee friend beats him up. But Chewbacca has taken a temporary leave of absence and as Solo realises his predicament, so do we as readers. The lizard throws Solo across the room in the last panel of the page before this one.
In the first panel above he lands in the arms of Chewie. We now know where the story is going. The tables have been turned and Chewbacca is hopefully going to put the alien in his place. The page builds up nicely to this, the bully now going from offensively cocksure to scared.
Crucially, and the part that impressed me as a kid, was that we do not get to see the point of impact when Chewbacca moves from passive to aggressive. The scene switches to outside and the lizard is smashing through the window – we are left to picture for ourselves Chewbacca hitting him.
A couple of years after I read that, the 1962 Hulk page above by Stan Lee and Jack Kirby was reprinted in a UK Hulk Annual. They were printed on nicer paper than the
comics, explaining the clarity of the page over the Star Wars one. I’ve written
about it on this blog before, and decided to
take it along for this talk as Kirby is applying the same device as Chaykin
i.e. we don’t get to see the Hulk hitting the Human Cannonball.
This page also has a lot of other artistic merits; the movement and weight of the Hulk is dramatically shown in the third, fourth, fifth and seventh panels. The extreme angle switches for each panel are cleverly designed and effortless for the reader to understand. It’s a great example of Kirby’s prowess.
The decision to not actually depict the hero striking the villain in these two pages gives us two examples of the story telling trope of showing, and not telling. This practice does not apply only to physical action, but that was a great place to start for me as a kid.
Twenty years later Scott McCloud explained this in his very influential book Understanding Comics, but I was lucky enough to pick it up firsthand while sitting on my couch eating sweets and reading about Star Wars and The Hulk.
Wednesday, March 11, 2015
I attended the Scottish Comics Unconference Meet-Up in Glasgow last week. Here are a few photos from the day.
Unfortunately, the two talks I was most interested in clashed (Self-publishing and Autobiography). As it was, I went for self-publishing and was asked to talk about my experiences to get the thing rolling.
As the day progressed, it was nice to see many of the people at the discussions drawing away. Ludi Price encouraged me to join in too and I did! I tweeted the following:
The day ended with a DeeCAP comics reading. I decided to do my two stories from the latest issue of Treehouse. Here's a photo taken by cartoonist Paddy Johnston (who also performed):
Monday, March 09, 2015
Click here for a video from my comics reading at the Scottish Comics Unconference in Glasgow on Saturday 28th February. This was filmed by Damon Herd for DeeCAP.
The two stories I read here are included in Treehouse #5.
Sunday, March 08, 2015
I've a couple of stories in there: "The Martians"; a four pager written by me and drawn by Neil Paterson, and a one pager I wrote and drew called "I Don't Give a Fuck".
The comic also features stories by Andy Herd, David Peter Kerr, Balazs Lorinczi, Norrie Millar, Neil Scott and Ali Smith.
It's available now in the Fred Egg Comics Shop.
Tuesday, March 03, 2015
I think the next Spider-Man movie should include his origin again, to help people get to know the character. I think the film after that should then feature Uncle Ben again, getting shot, a new actor playing Spider-Man, a new director. A year later include the origin again with a new Spider-Man. Come on we can do this.
Alternatively, no origin recap, but recast The Lizard and Green Goblin again. Or don't use the Goblin again. Bring in a guy with a fishbowl to be Mysterio. No, no fishbowl.
Can’t wait for a CGI figure to streak through the sky and land beside Thor in Avengers 3 and then a real life actor (DOESN’T MATTER) to say 'I’m Spider-Man, Thor'. Awesome. Then The Guardians of the Galaxy will land their spaceship on top of them.
I want Hugh Jackman to appear, and whoever is playing the FF in the concurrent reboot (or recast them for this appearance). Put Nicolas Cage on a motorbike and set his head on fire again.
Can DC and Marvel merge FFS? I want all the characters to fight each other in an orgy of destruction, before entering a new dimension and fighting the Empire in Star Wars.